C1 Stage 1: Sentence
Admit a point, then make yours (concession)
Concession in essays: Admittedly, Granted, While it is true that
You can say that the other side has one good point and still make your own point, in one sentence.
This guide is for B2 writers moving to C1. It is a stage 1 skill: write one sentence (8-50 words).
When to use concession
When a topic has two sides and you want to show that you know the other side. It works well before your main reason, or as the first sentence of an argument.
Concession: how to do it
First give a point from the other side, and be fair: say what is really good about it and why. Then give your own point, which must be the stronger one. Try an opener that is more than a plain 'Although': 'Admittedly, online classes save hours of travel, but they make it harder to stay motivated.' 'Granted, ...' and 'Much as ...' work in the same way. Readers trust you more when you are fair to the other side. This is called a concession.
Useful language for concession
- Admittedly, ..., but ...
- Granted, ..., but ...
- While it is true that ..., ...
- Much as ..., ...
- Even if ..., ...
Example of concession
Admittedly, homework teaches children to plan their own time, but it also takes time away from play, which matters far more at that age.
Topic: Homework for young children
How the BetterWrite coach checks concession
The BetterWrite coach checks 3 points for this skill, plus accuracy and staying on topic, and quotes your own words when one is not there yet.
Try it
Write ONE sentence about banning cars from city centres that admits a point from the other side and then makes your own point.
Write 8-50 words (one sentence).