A fully developed argument

When to use a developed argument

Whenever you are asked for your opinion in a paragraph. It uses all the skills you have learned so far.

A developed argument: how to do it

This brings together everything so far: a first sentence that takes a clear side, two reasons each with an example or explanation, one point from the other side that you answer, and a last sentence that says what follows from your argument (not a copy of your first sentence). After each reason, ask: 'for example?' and 'so what?'

Useful language for a developed argument

• There are strong grounds for believing that ...
• The most convincing reason is ...
• Equally important is ...
• Admittedly, ...
• Yet ...
• Ultimately, ...

Example of a developed argument

There are strong grounds for making public transport free in large cities. The most convincing reason is environmental: every journey that moves from a private car to a bus or tram reduces both emissions and congestion, and removing the fare gives people a daily reason to switch. Equally important is fairness. Low-income workers, who often live furthest from their jobs, spend a far larger share of their wages on fares than wealthier commuters do, so free travel would put money back where it is most needed. Admittedly, the cost would have to be covered by taxes, and critics fear that free services would become overcrowded and poorly maintained. Yet cities already spend heavily on roads and on treating the health effects of air pollution, and part of that money could be redirected to buses and trains. Ultimately, free transport is less a gift to passengers than an investment in a cleaner and fairer city.

Topic: Free public transport

How the BetterWrite coach checks a developed argument

The BetterWrite coach checks 5 points for this skill, plus accuracy and staying on topic, and quotes your own words when one is not there yet.

Try it

Write one paragraph (150-220 words) for your tutor, arguing for or against this: a four-day working week should be standard.

Write 150-220 words (one full paragraph).

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