B2 Stage 2: Linked sentences
Support a point with an example
Giving examples in writing: for example, for instance
You can support a point with an example a reader can picture, and say what it shows.
This guide is for B1 writers moving to B2. It is a stage 2 skill: write 2-3 sentences (20-70 words).
When to use examples
Every time you make a point that a reader might not simply believe. Point first, then an example, then what it shows.
Examples: how to do it
A point needs an example to be believed. Use this order: 1) your point, 2) an example a reader can picture (a typical person, place or moment, not 'many people'), 3) one sentence that says what the example shows. Compare 'Walking is good. For example, many people walk.' with 'Walking to work clears the head. For example, a teacher who walks to school arrives calm and ready to talk to her class. This shows that a short walk is a good start to the day.' Keep it honest: a typical case is fine; an invented study or number is not.
Useful language for examples
- For example, ...
- For instance, ...
- A good example is ...
- Take ..., for example.
- This shows that ...
- This means that ...
Example of examples
Greeting neighbours makes life easier for older people. For example, a woman living alone feels safer when the family next door says hello every morning. This shows that a small hello can help older people stay in their own homes.
Topic: Greeting neighbours
How the BetterWrite coach checks examples
The BetterWrite coach checks 3 points for this skill, plus accuracy and staying on topic, and quotes your own words when one is not there yet.
Try it
Write 2-3 sentences about the value of hobbies: make a point, give an example a reader can picture, then say what the example shows.
Write 20-70 words (2-3 sentences).