C1 Stage 3: Short paragraph
Open a paragraph with a clear point
Topic sentences: how to open a paragraph with a clear point
You can write a paragraph whose first sentence makes one clear point, and every other sentence supports it.
This guide is for B2 writers moving to C1. It is a stage 3 skill: write one short paragraph (80-130 words).
When to use a topic sentence
At the start of every paragraph you write, on any topic. Write the point first, then check that each sentence after it supports it.
A topic sentence: how to do it
The first sentence of a paragraph (the topic sentence) should make a point, not just name the topic. Not 'This paragraph is about cities' but 'Cities are becoming harder places to raise children.' Every other sentence should support that point. If a sentence talks about something else, cut it. After your point, ask: 'why?' and 'for whom?' and write the answers.
Useful language for a topic sentence
- One of the main reasons ... is ...
- ... has changed ... in two important ways.
- Perhaps the clearest sign of ... is ...
- In addition, ...
- Moreover, ...
- In this way, ...
Example of a topic sentence
For many people who live alone, a pet provides a structure that their days would otherwise lack. A dog needs to be walked at the same times every morning and evening, whatever the weather, which takes its owner outside and into contact with neighbours. Even a cat, though more independent, has to be fed and cared for, giving its owner a small but real sense of responsibility. In this way, pets offer more than company: they quietly organise the lives of the people who look after them.
Topic: Why people keep pets
How the BetterWrite coach checks a topic sentence
The BetterWrite coach checks 3 points for this skill, plus accuracy and staying on topic, and quotes your own words when one is not there yet.
Try it
Write a short paragraph (80-130 words) about why people move to big cities. Start with a topic sentence that makes a clear point, and develop only that point.
Write 80-130 words (one short paragraph).